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Chapter 11 was scorchingly sexy. I am glad that Leyjen has Amraeen to teach him about life and love. I love the meeting between Pol. and Brigale. Those two were both in need of friendship. I am so sad about Brigale's father and brothers. How sad to suspect the future and to be unable to change anything. These poor boys have so many hardships ahead of them. I am sorry for Bri losing his entire family and Pol being abandoned by his entire family in his time of need. The story is going so beautifully and I hope your days are going better. The writing is such high quality. This story is definitely publishing quality.

The two finally meet! I love little Pol. He is so calm and focused - even hanging out in Leyjen's room to avoid his evil brothers. It was touching to see that Shirnin is still watching over the house and Leyjen's room. The whole story is so loaded with emotions.

Great new chapters. Those twins are holy terrors for their parents. I get the feeling that both of Pol's brothers are already jealous of him. They are always trying to get him in toruble. I like how Leyjen is already bonding with Polinues.

I got a good laugh out of the last chapter. Babies can be so evil! When my daughter was 18 months old, she was just barely walking yet one day she crawled over to her cousin who was the same age and always harassing her and she bit him right on the forehead with her super sharp baby teeth. I almost died of shame that day. Now I can look back and laugh.

The new story is going great. The description of the birth was very powerful- wow! Wrailan is a very interesting character. He seems like he is good most of the time unless he needs to be ruthless - like replacing his wife for more children. What a thing to do!

Chapter 4 is killing me! Poor Leyjen hs had such a hard life. WAAH!

This is the most beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I am so glad that Leyjen did not get raped by Wendwyr. Leyjen has such a tough life ahead of him. I can't wait to see what happens with the birth of Pol and his brother. Lovely writing.

Thanks for the first chapter. Very well written story. Poor Ley had bad luck right from the start with his mother being the person who shamed Pol.'s father. I love this story and I can't wait to read some more. Maybe posting this in the original slash/male/male section would get more readers for your fabulous story.