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Wonderful story. Each chapter is better than the one before it and I can't wait to see more.

Beautiful new chapters. Such different worlds for Leyjen. Happiness and love with Amraeen and then the stress of being in the Temples with Pol. Poor Pol is truly suffering. Plus leyjen probably realizes that he is a part of Pol's nightmares. It is amusing that Pol is already jealous and possessive of Leyjen. Maybe his jealousy and worries about Leyjen are helping to fuel the nightmares. I love the gift that Amraeen gave to Leyjen. Amraeen's love is so pure and beautiful. It really puts a interesting twist into the story.

Oh I hope Amraeen is in trouble again! This chapter was so deep. When Amraeen spoke of knowing that Leyjen was his soulmate because of his scent, I had to go back and read the whole story again to find Leyjen's reaction to meeting Pol. It was when he was hit by Pol's scent that he realized that Pol was definitely the one he was to protect. After talking with Amraeen I think Leyjen must have realized right then that Pol is the one who carries the perfect scent for him. I am curious to find out why Amraeen was forced to run away from his home town. This story is so well written. I really admire you for all the beautiful prose and the detailed plot. I think when the story is definitely publication worthy.

It is amazing that the twins could be such polar opposites. They hate each other and they are still so young! It is hard to imagine sweet Pol getting so angry with anyone. I love Amraeen. Of all the characters, he is the one who has gone without love for so long. He deserves some joy. I am so glad that Leyjen is able to make him happy. Great chapter. I was very happy to see an update. I am wondering if Pol and Arlathi will make it to adulthood without killing each other.

Great new chapters. More trouble for Leyjen and Pol if the Vampires show up, I loved the library scene with Tisek slapping Leyjen. I had a good laugh from that one. Pol is so small but he already seems so wise about so many things.

This was an excellent chapter. I see Leyjen is getting even closer to Amraeen and feeling attracted to Pol at the same time. Plus Tisek seems like he would like to join in the Leyjen fanclub. I feel sorry for Leyjen because he is being pulled in so many directions at the same time. He is in love with Amraeen and would love to spend all his time with him and he is also bound and attracted to little Pol. Plus he has had the strain of the accident and Pol's injuries weighing on him. I am also glad that Amraeen is happy. He definitely deserves some happiness. I hope their time together will last for a while.

Great new chapter. I loved the sex scenes. The image of Leyjen gnawing on the tiny rabbits really got stuck in my head too. Leyjen could have gone mad with bloodlust if he had delayed feeding any longer. Now I am worried that Tisek is going to get himself into trouble by trying to find out about Leyjen's nighttime outings. I can't imagine that he could survive if he found out about Amraeen and the whole hunting and killing thing. I know that Ley and Pol will eventually be together but I am really happy that Amraeen is getting some sincere love from Ley. He really deserves some happiness. I am looking forward to seeing what will happen next.

I lovede this chapter. Leyjen has such a burden on his shoulders. It was really unfair to leave him to take care of Pol. I can't imagine what it would have been like for Pol if Ley had not been there. I hope Tisek will survive his attempt to help Leyjen since Leyjen is in desperate need of some feeding. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful chapter. I am so sorry for little Polinues - how terrible to wake up and find that you have been disfigured for life. The whole incident was a torture for Leyjen as well. The poor boy needs to go out and get some blood. Hopefully Amraeen will be waiting for him in the woods

The betrayal chapter. Very well done. It still hurts to imagine that Pol's parents just turned away from him when he was in the fire. This was a hard night for Leyjen - getting attacked and almost losing Amraeen and crossing the line with Pol on the same night. This story is so well written. I wish I could hang a banner on it. Perhaps the story would get the attention of more readers if you posted it in the Original Slash/ Male-Male section as well. I think that is the most popular section of AFF.