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Great chapter. The re introduction of Hypnatos (had to go look for the name) is pretty spooky. I bet He will be a difficult adversary and I can't wait for the showdown. And poor Leyjen is so helpless against Polinues when he wants something, but this new information of war is interesting. YAY Owain got a hand thingy. It's the first time Polinues meets Owain's father and the first time we, the readers, get to see just how thankful Owain's family is that Polinues saved his life. And the make up talk was really kind of sweet if you ask me

Keep up the good work and I will keep reading

Awesome! Blazing hot chapter. The love scene was excellent. I think Pol was definitely ready for Leyjen after all these years. Leyjen is so beautiful and sexy. I really love him so much. I am glad he has finally given in to his desire for Pol. They should enjoy their time together. I love it.

Love the new chapter Darkling Willow. It is kind of weird but I feel like Owain fits in even better with Pol now that he has lost his hand. Maybe because they both have a physical defect that they have to live with. I can see that Pol is attracted to Owain. Is he falling in love with him as well? I also wonder if Leyjen suspects the real reason for Pol's long absence from his bed. You would think that after all they have been through together that they would be more honest with each other. They could support each other more. I guess it is just human nature to hide your flaws (especially the "I kill people and drink their blood" kind of flaw. I hope you are all settled in and everything is going well. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter Darkling Willow. I still have the image of spitting lizards in my head. Yikes! It is good that Leyjen got rid of that rapist stable hand. He definitely deserved it. Poor Tiensin. I am assuming that Owain was the same guy that Pol was admiring when the executioner family moved in. I hope Leyjen will be friends with him too or there might be some jealousy in the air. Love the new chapter. I have been on vacation and I was so happy to see an update. I hope everything is going well for you.

Although I hope Polinues and Owain will be good friends I can't help but hope Owain will not come between Leyjen and Polinues, there seem to be subtle hints of some attraction on Polinues' side. As for the other part of the chapter I find it to be troubling, poor tiensin going through all that, I think that stablehand got exactly what he deserved. nice hint with the scent of roganwood in the end of the chapter

Keep up the good work

This chapter was lots of fun to read. Polinues is so good at being a tease. Leyjen is putting up a good fight but I don't think he will be able to resist Pol seductions for much longer. I can't wait for that. Poor Arlathi is quite the comedic villain. He is so evil and mean, but I have to laugh when I remember that life has played a cruel trick on him, He is destined to be a failure as a mage. It seemed like Charlotta was rather sharp with Leyjen when he arrived. It made me wonder if she had heard some kind of gossip about him and Pol. I hope that no one has found out their secret. Great chapter Darkling Willow. Hope to hear from you soon.

Wow! Two intense chapters. Poor Lanja. Her brother Arlathi was so evil to deliberately cause her dress to be ruined. It is too bad that she is getting married to a questionable type of husband. It is only a matter of time till he takes up with his lover again. So Leyjen has found out about Amraeen. It seems that he has accepted that Amraeen had to go. The whole chapter was amazing. Pol has finally claimed Leyjen. As usual, their emotions are so intense. Leyjen seemed to be saying his final goodbye to his relationship with Amraeen. Very hot sex scenes by the way. Good luck with the wedding Darkling Willow. I hope you have a wonderful wedding day and honeymoon.

oh please update this soon!
ASOTA

I am confused.Polineus likes cloves.Len smells like poppy. Len loves Amraen. But suddenly POl and Len are confessing their undying love and are at it like rabits.
Not to mention that sentence that goes like this: I love you, I hate you, I'd die for you,I'd lkill for you, you commandme, till the rest of your life...blabla that is called cliche and stupid.
I really do like zhis story I was looking forward to mpreg, this is indeed a new take on magic&vampire genre.For some reason even though there aren't many descriptions about housing, nature,landscape through interaction of th echaracters you get enough info about all these things.The story i snever boring but..I did not like his chapter.
I am confused where is it leading to.I don't feel that the Pol And Len's love or whaever you call it advanced with this sexual act.I think it was uneccessary .. and If I would be cruel I would even call it tacky.

Great chapter Darkling Willow!  How could these boys think they could get away with attacking Polinues? How terrible for poor Pol. This chapter made me so sad. I feel as if Leyjen heart has been demolished and he has given up all hope.  Even though Pol is in love with Leyjen right now, it feels like Leyjen has already given up on having a loving relationship with Pol.  leyjen should recall that even though Pol is his soul mate, he was also capable of loving Amraeen completely.  The same can be true for Pol.  Such angst!  Good luck with everything you have going on.  It must be hard to write such sadness when you are feeling happiness in your own life. 

Kylee