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for Just like cinnamon

by LaJinxess

person herbcat1
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jinx,

"Just like Cinnamon" was such a great story. I loved the way you took the reader alternately into the minds of the two brothers, to see how it felt from both sides. You didn't specify their ages, but obviously they're both adolescents, and by my guess maybe 12 and 16. You perfectly captured the two voices of boys those ages. I'd love to read more of your work.

Thank you for your review of my story "How to Create a Fuckboy." I'm glad you liked it. If you get a chance to read any of my other stories, I'd be glad to hear what you think, positive or negative.

herbcat
herb_cat@mailcity.com
person Juana13
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck...
That was so fuckin sexy...so sinful and wrong though too. : )
more please? I know this was a oneshot, but I would love a delicious sequel : )