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September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story and i really hope that there is more to come, please update soon!!!
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww poor bunny. very good story so far
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally caught up with your story. The last chapter wasn't as good as the previous chapters. The lemon was ok. I know how hard it is to write a lemon scene. Trust me, when i first started writing it was hard for me as well. anyway i looked forward to your next update.:)
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, thank you for the explanation. I hope you continue this story. I just have one slight request, you never really described what Loki looks like. You stated he was covered in mud, but never said what color his hair is or eyes. If you would please could you describe what Loki looks like in your next chapter. Also, is the mud gone?
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say that it must have hurt loki very much all that piercing, more please:)
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Impresive. Wow! Very original punishment for this tale.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is great, looking forward to the next one:)
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, but I'm confused. The man calls Loki Vincint and Val. What is the god's real name? Is it Loki, Val, or Vincint.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I will look forward to this tale. You manage to create a very good beginning.
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just reading the first chapter already got me hook, that I have to leave you a review and I hardly review. please update soon:)