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Been a wait since the last update, this is such a great story, please don't give up on it and update soon. Thanks.

I don't know if poor Zephyr is going to survive having Eric as a husband. I think Garrick and Erin are so cute. I kind of wonder if Casey is feeling a little bit jealous. I wonder if Casey will get a love interest too.

Well Eric is quite the brat now isn't he. Erin is certainly more mature but a bit duller. I think Zephyr has his hands full with Eric now being his husband that was cute but a bit fast and not very realistic I mean why in the world would Eric even agree to that so fast makes no sense it's not like his life was in danger or anything. And Eric allowing Garrick to kiss him willy nilly another little bit that makes not a lot of sense let alone why Garrick would just keep kissing him confusing to say the least. I can't wait to see where else you take this though. Thank you for emailing me otherwise I would never have been able to read this funny little bit. Please let me know when you have the next chapter up at brzachman@yahoo.com thank you.

Very cool and I am so relieved that Devon got away and now after hearing about Casey I'm relieved he's also not with that psychopath anymore. Boy they have got to get Erin's son away from that fruitcake and put him somewhere he can't hurt anyone anymore yeesh just plain nasty. I love Eric he is so totally feisty and ornery can't wait to see how he tries to resist Zephyr I think that's my favorite part I truly hope Eric doesn't just give in but at least tries to put up a good resistance I hate it when the feisty ones always tend to just give in when it comes to sex takes all the passion out of it when only one partner has complete control and practically overwhelms the other. Can't wait for the next chapter let me know when you write it okay again it's brzachman@yahoo.com. I am loving this story.

This story is well enchanting to say the least and I love Eric and Erin Eric the most though he's got real fire. Garrick and Zaphyr are asses but that's typical for their types at least they also have honor. I can't wait to see what happens next this is so amazingly exciting. I hope Devon finds someone who loves him and vice versa he seems wonderful maybe Travis huh. Anyway could you let me know when you update this my email is brzachman@yahoo.com thank you for sharing this great story.

I really like this story!!! I want to see what happens net to the twin brothers; their story is so interesting! I want to know more. XD
You are doing a fantastic job on this story, I love it!, please update more! XD

Great story! I like how you switch between the 2 worlds without it becoming confusing for the reader.
Hope you're updating soon.

Review 1-8: Omygosh no, don't stop there. It was such a cliffhanger. I was wondering how long Erin was with Logan and what resulted from that time and chapter 8 answered all that for me. This is why I like reading your stories so much, whenever there is a little "huh?" in the part before, the part after will explain them away. You know, I think Erin and Garrick will be together but for some reason, once in a while, I could see Erin and Logan and Casey and Garrick. Logan is an selfish ass, I just hoped that he really did love Erin all those years so that Erin won't be too sad about his the past few years of his life. Looking forward to more as always. Great job yaoilovers and beta kylee.

I laughed so hard over line, "I like him [Erin] better as sleep," Garrick said to Devon when he was holding onto a sleeping Erin. So sweet and stupid to think that, Erin's gonna kick him if he heard :)

I'm too tired and sick to right much so I'm just going to say I love the chapter and I can't wait for more. Update soon please!