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Great story! Hope to see more soon.

Somnium, you made my Friday night! Thanks for the new chapter of Loyalty. Now I am worried about Artemis going off while the kidnappings are still going on. It would break my heart. I am hoping that Prince Brennan and Lord Caito will get to some smexing before Caito goes off on his mission. I can just picture Bren laying all by his lonesome between those sheets. LOL. Either way I love this story and I am so happy to see an update. Keep up the good writing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Chapter 1. Wo~ Now this is captivating. I love the way you have with words in verbalizing how everything in this story looks to the way the characters breath and move. Sensual in the smoothness of one sentence to another and your characters are interesting with a depth that's still to be explored. Intriguing and mysterious.

Chapter 2. My favorite passage of this chapter. :3

“No, just a feeling. And I trust my feelings, Vos. Women's instinct, much better than you men’s logic.”

Chapter 3. Gai and Bren. That will make it way easier for me to figure out who's who. X3 And this short adventure into the market was tantalizing. I kept waiting for something to happen and the unexpected happened. I thought, burning forest, and you came with a subtle water ripple; with a ripple effect.

Chapter 4. Anticipation. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Bren and Gai's escape with Arti and Charl was described in such depth that it seemed more like a lover's secret meeting then an escape to gain a bit of peace in their ever chaotic life. Bren and Gai are drawing onto each other without realizing it.

Chapter 4 was great. I like that Gai is feeling attracted to Brennan. Arti seems to like Charl as well. Very nice. The prince seems to have some plan for flushing out the kidnapper. I can't wait to see how that turns out.

I love this story! There are a lot of secrets going on in the prince's world. Very interesting.

Very interesting new story. It seems the King has some kind of infectious illness that the Prince is trying to keep secret. It also seems that the Prince already has a little crush on Lord Caito. I am already hooked. I would love to read another chapter.