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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It was fun seeing the dandyish men falling for their 'bears'. Very sexy and well written.
I only wish you would have written a lemony scene with Sparky topping Grizzly, as they talked about in their phone sex scene. I know you could make it very hot and believable.
I only wish you would have written a lemony scene with Sparky topping Grizzly, as they talked about in their phone sex scene. I know you could make it very hot and believable.
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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story last night, and I'm completely in love with it! It's both funny, romantic and hot, the perfect combination. I love the characters, nice to see someone playing around with stereotypes like this... also a nice switch in couples, even though I like both of them, without switching focus it might get boring just following 'sparky' and Grizz' ;)Great work, I'll be watching for the next chapter!
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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now I like Nick and Angel. I especially liked the chef's surprise-- "I'm his brother! Surprise!" That was fun. And smart to have Angel introduce his brother, to show his past is not one-dimensional, and that he's not a loner.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with this fic! It's so hot and cute at the same time. I'm glad this isn't a oneshot at all and so happy that Nix will have his own match with Angel. I laughed so hard when Nix was mistaken for a lady by the policeman. XD
Keep up with the writing! :D
Keep up with the writing! :D
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't sure that I liked the Nix/Angel pairing as much as the Sparky/Grizzly pairing, but chapter six has been my favorite by far. I was pretty much ready for Nix to get his ass pounded, but I was not expecting this romantic turn of events. It was a very pleasant surprise. Two gold stars.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laevi you are teasing us! Poor Nixy got sent home alone. Angel is really making him beg for it. Poor Nix has fallen really hard for Angel condsidering how he felt about him before. I think they will make the perfect couple. I can't wait for Angel to give Nixy what he really wants.
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, this is some hot stuff right here. The sex scenes were awesome and the characters were just too cool. I hope Nix and Angel do get together, they would be like an old married couple bitching at each other every five minutes! Can't wait for the next chappy!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
one word... *___* more!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I wasn't sure how you would pull off more than a one shot, at first, but it totally works. I'm not usually into bears in real life, but I adore Grizzly. And I can't wait to see what goes down between Nix and Angel. I feel like Nix us gonna get his ass pounded and love it.
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
This is funny as heck! He was a pearl, and he'd thrown himself at a swine. Hehehe!
Well done, Laevi :)
This is funny as heck! He was a pearl, and he'd thrown himself at a swine. Hehehe!
Well done, Laevi :)