rate_review Reviews

Oh my god it's so freaking cute. I can't even- that is the most adorable thing- I just- I mean... Guh. It's too cute. I've drowned in cuteness.

woww this is the best oneshot I've ever read!!! It had everything--humor, drama, perfect ending, orginiality lol! And I agree with the above reviewer that this really pulled at the heartstrings a couple of times :). So yeah this was totally amaziiiingggg how you could construct such a good, comprehensive story that just gave you the warm gooey feeling and a bit of drama too :) Great work! :D

lovely story :) sooo sweet

for some reason this short story had me bawling tears up until the last quarter portion. at the end i had to go to the bathroom to wash it all off. XD

some parts also gave me that heart aching sensation - wow. i'm so amazed at how immersed i was in this story and the characters. maybe it's because i'm also listening to melancholy music. but wow. this story is so bomb. i love the characters. i wish i could read more about them - but then that would mean a longer story and i like that this one has an ending ^_^
great work!

Wow those were some hard/odd requirements but you definitely pulled through! What a really sweet story! I was worried at first when it kept getting sadder and more angsty and then he denied the proposal. I had to look back up at the story codes to remind myself this would end well. Very well executed =)

wow, this story is amazing! :)
ASOTA

This was a very sweet Christmas story. Thanks for sharing it.

I loved this!