rate_review Reviews

This is a very crafty story. It really makes me think. I don't think I would agree to step aside and be my husband's mistress either. I don't understand why Arian treats Jamie so badly. How could he use his own son like that especially after abandoning him in the past? I also feel sorry for little Caelane. I wonder if Arain will eventually learn his lesson.

Very interesting chapter 2. It seems Sebastian remembers Jamie from the past for some reason. Poor Jamie must feel frustrated with the forced wedding and his Arian showing up. I am dying to learn more about Sebastian and why he wanted to find Jamie.

I liked thise chapter even more, i'm curious to learn more about the king's past with Jaime.

Great!!! Want more!!!

Okay this is getting good!
But do you have to leave it with Jamie being poisoned? :(
Please update soon!

Jamie has been poisoned and I bet I know who it is...I can't wait to read more. Thank you!

Oh no, poison, bet we all know who did it right?

A very interesting story so far.

Jamie is likable. I'm still unsure about Sebastian though... so far nice to Jamie but a real bastard towards Leon/Adrian (understandable saying up until recently were enemies). I'm curious as to why he picked Jamie as his third consort. Does the third consort mean that the other two have passed away or are they still around and Jamie is is just another prize to be tucked away in Sebastian's harem?

I've read bits and pieces of your other stories and think you are a talented writer. My only critique thus far would be spelling and grammar mistakes. You would do wonders with a beta!

Interesting story. So what does the kid look like? His he short tall or inbetween? And I really like that this story because it is different and I really like different. Oh, one more thing how old is the boy?

I like this story but it's painful to read with the grammer, I could edit this chapter for you if you would like.