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I *Loooooooooove* your story!!! Please! Please! Please! Update soon.

This is a really great story I love all the twist and turns

Thanks for the new chapter. Poor Kade. I can't believe that Nicholas left the poor boy there with the king of Nary. Thanks for explaining the relationship between Eli and Sebastian. It is too bad that Conor is actually a bad guy. It looks like Leon and Theron are attracted to each other. That is good because Caelean will need a loving family after Arian abandoned him. I think Arian has now gone past the limits of forgiveness. He has betrayed so many people including poor Kade. How selfish! I am praying that they will be able to rescue Kade. It makes me so sad that he is there in the cage. I also hope that there will be some steamy love scenes when Jamie and Sebastian finally get married. :P I am guessing that they will not marry until Eli is rescued. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This story is quite interesting. The characters are all so complex that I don't know how to feel about some of them. I am sometimes sympathetic to Arian even though he is doing all these horrible things. I kind of feel like he should dump Leon after Leon was not strong enough to defend Arian against Sebastian. On the other hand there is no way to forgive Arian for how evil he is to his own son Jamie. Sebastian seems to have a good heart but he is a very controlling and interfering king. He seems to want to control everyone around him. First he made Leon dump demote Arian to mistress and now he wants to make Leon give his son Kade away in marriage to someone else. Leon does not seem to have any power in their alliance. It also seems like Sebastian got married to Eli just to keep him away from someone else. Sebastian is a very mischievous king. I hope Jamie will be okay after the attack. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I hope Arian suffers a very slow and painful death. Really agonizingly slow and unbearably painful. No father should ever take his son's life all for the sake of holding on to some position. What a SCUMBAG!!! Can't wait to see whether my wish will be granted or not.

great chappie i bet it was Karsten Arian was doing. the bastard never learns.

Very interesting developments in the story. Is Jeffery the king the same Jeff that was Jamie's father? Or is his Jamies's relative in some way. It looks like Arian is about to get himself into more trouble. He seems to be making one mistake after another. I am very eager to find out how Sebastian met Jamie in the past.

what happened next? :)

this is a really good story please continue it soon! Jamie's dad is a selfish bastard and only cares about living the good life, and Jeffery....is he Jamie's father that died or...his uncle?

It's like a soap opera lol. DUN DUN DUN....omg father's not really dead?! Or maybe it's his father's twin brother!