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I had such a good laugh when Caelane got up on tiptoe to whisper to Eli about what Anders did to him. In great detail too! Great chapter. Conor and Eli have a lot of work to do on their relationship. I should go back to check in the older chapters, but did Anders steal Conor away from Eli? Are Conor and Anders married to each other. it is too bad that Eli and Conor had to spend twenty years apart from each other. So sad. I do love Anders and Caelane. I am wondering if Caelane will eventually meet Felix and how they will react to each other since they are both around the same age.

I like the story. It just has too many story lines. You have enough for about 2 sequels. I'm only at chapter 16 but I keep getting characters confused. Also I would like to see more description of the characters.

Hurray for Anders and Caelane! Lovely smex scene. I loved it. They make such a perfect couple. Even if Anders is already up to no good. I don't understand how Arian can be so evil to his own child. Especially after being a gentle parent to him for so many years. I hope Eli and Conor will be able to resolve some of their problems. They have been separated for so long. I am also wondering what Conor is up to by joining with Anders. I loved the scene between Sebastian and Jamie. They are going to have a big challenge ahead of them if they want to get Eli and Caelane back. I know Anders will not be giving Caelane up anytime soon. Great chapter.

Yay for Ray and Caelane making out! Now Caelane has to find the courage to see Ray again. I have to confess that I am a little sorry for the monster. He is evil but rather hilarious at the same time. It is too bad that he did all of this out of love for Sebastian. He was kind of stupid to think that they would not notice all the dead servants. LOL. Anyway I am so glad that Jamie has found Eli and Caelane. I am wondering how this will impact Jamie's baby that he was carrying. Excellent chapter. I really enjoyed this one.

thank god they found out sooner. just need to get our cute little sparrow back home.

I'm absolutely in love with this story. I can't wait to know what happens with Davis and Jamie's half-brother. I hope the next chapter will be posted soon. I've finished reading the Forbidden Book 1 and 2 and I really like your stories I'm sure I will like the rest of them, too. :)

Jay is acting a little suspicious. I wonder what he is planning? I also wonder if Sebastian ever reconciled with his dad. I love Caelane and Ray. I can't wait for Ray to have his way with Caelane.

Awesome chapters. What is going on with Ray and Caelane. Now Kade is with the King of Sythia and Caelane is with the mysterious guy that Arian was working for. Arian will never learn. Shame on him for throwing away his love for his children. What is the point of being married to a king if all your children are hurt and damaged? I love the pairing of Caelane and Ray. I hope they get to be together.

Oh Jamie is going to have a baby! How cute ^_^ I love this story. its rare to get to read a good Mpreg fiction. I wonder how Jamie will give birth? Does a channel develop or does he have to have a c-section? I can't wait to find out. And I wonder what's going on with the imposter Ray, maybe his heart will change his actions?

Also if you need a beta I would be happy to help you check your spelling and grammar. Although I admit that my own spelling and grammar is not perfect I would be happy to assit you if you like.

Chapter 18. 9 Chapters............ I was so lost trying to figure out where I left off and I was 9 chapters outdated. lol omg xD But now, I'm all caught up! yay! so far you've still got me baited, hooked and sunken with your story. hope to read more when you update!