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So much drama. I hope that he gets his baby back. Please update soon.

Ok now I am totally confused about who is who's child @.@
Not to be picky or anything but 'Ana' and 'Fay' sound like girl names and I'm pretty sure Fay is spelt with an 'e' not an 'a' if you are talking about the word for fairies.....one other thing, what does Jamie look like? You mentioned that Fay is a smaller version of Jamie but I don't know what he looks like. Could you slip some features/descriptions into the next chapter just to help me visulise the children in my head?

Oh my god!!!! OWO One, thank god that cliff hanger didn't end up like I thought it would, and two, HOLY CRAP!!!! SOOOOO not expecting that plot twist... But seriously... This family tree is getting REALLY confusing... >.< Update soon please...

Three babies! OMG! Leave it to Sebastian to threaten the poor doctor and invite himself to stay in Ander's house for an entire month. I am just glad that the babies are okay and I really want to see more of them. It is so cute that there is a little one with silver wings who looks just like Jamie. Amazing. I can't imagine what should be done with Arian. He has truly driven himself insane. I can't imagine that Jamie and Caelane will be willing for him to be killed. I also wonder if Jeffrey ever really loved him because there was also the relationship with Nicholas correct? I cant wait to see how things turn out especially for Anders and Caelane.

Poor Jamie, he always seems to get the worst of it

Damn it. What a horrible cliffhanger. This story just has so many plot twists and unexpected turns. I must admit, I had started to get confused after a while. I shall wait patiently for an update though. ^^

I was expecting something about Hayden to come up but I didn't expect this! So the twins are Anders's kids? Cool. I had a feeling Hayden killed himself, I don't know why but that's what I thought. That means Sabastian killed Ran for nothing since Connor didn't kill Hayden. Although, since Hayden was pregnant when he died it still means that Sabastian lost a child. There are so many characters in this fic I had to write up family trees for all of them otherwise I forgot who was who *laugh* now I need to change it ^_^ Good story, keep up the good work

Love the new chapter. Anders and Caelane are so cute together. I can't wait for them to make up. I can't believe that Sebastian married poor Devin off when he was only eight years old. He truly is a controlling one. He is always trying to dictate everyone's lives. Of course I am mad at Sebastian again. Jamie has a lot of work to do with him.

Sebastian is truly a heartless king. I can understand his rage towards Conor since he killed the first consort. However I am sad that he was willing to kill Eli after being with him for so long. He treated Eli so badly after Eli was the one who helped him to rescue his beloved Jamie when he was turned into a sparrow. I don't know what Jamie is up to, but it will remind Sebastian that he should not be so quick to cause harm to other people's loved one. I wonder what Jamie is planning to say to Anders? I actually like Anders more than Sebastian even though they are both bastards.

Best wishes for your brother's health. I hope they will figure out what the problem is soon.

I wonder what Sebastian has in mind for poor Eli. He is not playing fair considering that Eli was kidnapped and raped. I am guessing that Jamie would never forgive him if he did anything bad to Eli. The situation with Anders and Caelane is quite amusing. Anders has been found out and Caelane seems to be the jealous type especially now that he is pregnant. I am eager to see how Anders will sweet talk his way back into Caelane's good graces.