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I'm hooked^^ can't wait for more :)

OMG, please.....Please......PLEASE continue this story!!!!! I love this story, all the drama is addicting. I keep yelling at my computer, so I do hope you continue it because I'd love to finish it.

This is a fascinating story. I do hope you finish it someday. I know what its like to work on wips some of mine I have been working on for nearly ten years or more.

Omg! This story is amaZing... I salute you...

Please update soon...
I'm really looking forward with the story...

Omgoodness, this story has too many problems occurring at and after the same time. There is like no break at all it's sad, I just read till chapter 9 and Jamie almost died twice! There are too many characters popping up one after another too, I had to stop reading and figure out whose who after reading their names each time, and to top it off I still don't even know who Eli is, just that he's important to Jamie and Conor or something like that. I still don't have a clear image of how Jamie and Sebestian looks like, plus I felt no love in this story, it was a bit vague to me and the feelings felt like it was placed upon them too fast. But, even when there are flaws, I still enjoy this read. I had fell in loved with Jamie's attitude and his feistiness at the beginning, I had thought he was just gonna submit and do whatever Leon had told him to do at the beginning when he was forced to be Seb's consort but I'm glad he fought back with his venomous words, I was rooting for him! Anywho, I'm dropping this read because it was confusing me too much and although it was very interesting in a way to have problems occur one after another to keep the reader interested, I thought it was a bit too much, maybe another time, it just wasn't my cup of tea.

love it please more, it is grate , i love the story.

you know, the chinese people believe in the red string too... that there is an invisible red string of fate tied to our wrists connecting us to our soulmates from birth 千里姻缘一线牵.. are you chinese?

Nice story...but I really would love if you stopped usind past with present tenses. It is kind of annoying.
Examples:

Chapter 10
“Do you recognized any of those men making their way here?” Alan asked the boys. “Excused me! But who are you?”. “Alright I believed you.” Said Nicholas. “That pretty young man beside you is Caelane I presumed.” “Alright I believed you.” Said Nicholas. “That pretty young man beside you is Caelane I presumed.”

And this is only chapter 10 and less than 2 pharaagraphs.

Well do not want to be a sole asshole, but I must say that your story is really interesting and the characters are really human,so I like it a lot....so please.... do not use past with present auxiliaries. (You would have probably written it like "do not useD past... etc)

i love this story, i want more, more, more please!!!!!

I'm so glad you updated this story...I was starting to miss it. So Aria is dead and Jamie knows that Jeffery is his father. It was about time he figured that one out. I feel kinda sorry for Aria even though he was a b**tard. He never did get to see his grandkids after all. Speaking of which, do the twins have names? They are always referred to as 'the twins' or 'the boys'. Who the heck is Janus and what is this about him being Jeffery's half brother? And why does Jeffery's father want his son married to his grandson? How did Jeffery marry the dad of his half brother? This all sounds like incest to me. Not that I'm totally against incest but I'm not that comfortable with it. Is Devin still old or did he turn young again? I can't remember....Anyway, I'm glad you're back and I hope you can update this story soon.