rate_review Reviews

This story was just utterly beautiful and descriptive. This story pulled me in from the minute I read the title. But it's bittersweet D,: He loses his lover he's loved so long but they were able to show their love before Faolon's prince was dammed. This story made me cry as if I was in their position. Even though this story made me cry and was sad, I loved it. I just completely and utterly loved it. I applaud for the beautiful masterpiece and hope you will write more that will make me feel many emotions again. Thank you :D

Tragically beautiful. I had tears in my eyes at the end

Whoa! That was pretty darned sad, but still really good. This was well written. It snagged and kept my attention. So very happy to have read this.

Thanks for sharing!

This was such a wonderful story!!! But jet so sad!!! I really loved it!!! Thank ou for posting it!!!

Omg.. This story gave me goosebumps.. It has been a while since I had goosebumps. Omg! Such a sad story! I hope this isn't a one shot story. Please! Update as soon as possible! This is a wonderful, heartbreaking story. PEOPLE SHOULD READ THIS!!

Your beautiful story moved me to tears. Thank you for posting.

That... was the best story I've ever read! And, well, believe it or not, I thought Faolan would top. It could happen. ^^; But other than that, it was a great story and I look forward to more of your writing!

P.S.
I see you live in Florida. Me too! :D

Very good story. I can't believe they did not see each other again. Too sad.