rate_review Reviews

An interesting story; enjoyable. The period that came after their names kept throwing me, to be honest, but it didn't put me off too much. Even though I'm not especially into slash, I particularly enjoyed the sexy goodness. If you could turn me on with slash - and you did - then you did a good job! I quite like young Pol. ;-)

WAAH! I have to know what happens next. You can't leave it like that! I hope Pol's sister will tell him where Ley is.

OMG! I just finished chapter 7. The secret is out. I don't know how to feel about Pol's father. I guess it is understandable that he wants to break Pol and Ley up because of the family honor etc but it seems so selfish. Ley has been taking care of Pol for all these years when they had all abandoned him to the fire and then to his horrible injuries. I can't believe he would take away the only person to make life happy for Pol. So I am crossing my fingers as I go into Chapter 8. I hope I will not be crying my eyes out for the next week.

I can't bear it. I don't want Pol and Ley to be separated for a long time. I don't understand how Pol could bear to see or talk to his family again. Plus knowing that they never really cared about him. I feel as if the story is just beginning. I know that Ley had been living in fear for some time but if his purpose is to protect Pol, how can he do it from far away? Plus Ley really has no purpose in going to that other place. So I am hoping and praying that Pol will leave his family and follow Ley. I guess I will be crying my eyes out for the next week. I am grateful that both characters are still alive and able to find each other.

Happy New Year! It seems that Pol's life is in danger. This is the second time that he has almost died since he and Ley gave themselves to each other. That was a very close call. It would have killed me if the story ended in tragedy like that. This chapter was plenty smexy. I would love to read the entire story of Ley and Pol. I am eager to find out why Ley has become so desperate and also what caused Pol's family to abandon him like that during the fire. They did not even try to find him when the fire broke out.

Very exciting chapter. It seems that Ley has been pretending to work for the Vampyr while being one of the Aaenda at the same time. Does this mean that Pol's accident was actually a deliberate attempt to kill him? The scene where Pol described Ley's mother was very sad. It makes me wonder if she is still around the family home. Poor Ley has such a big job to do in protecting Pol. I hope Pol will be able to recover from this latest attack.

This story is great. Very hot. I love Pol and Ley. I can't wait to read some more.

Wow! That was the hottest sexiest sex scene I have read in a long time. Pol is very persistent. And quite naughty too. Imagine choosing the altar of all places. I love how Pol gave himself completely to Ley. I got a good when Pol started talking about having Ley's cock shoved up his ass. Poor Ley did not stand a chance. I am glad I got to read the story of Ley and Pol. I am sure the novel you are writing is awesome too.

Excellent chapter. Such awesome love scenes. I am happy that Pol is still well rounded and active after his horrible accident. He and Ley make a great couple. Pol is very naughty. I really hope they don't get caught. I really love this story. Bri also sounds like an interesting character.

This is an awesome story. I can't wait to see what Ley looks like in his full supernatural form. I hope that was a claiming bite that he gave to Pol. The story is very interesting. I am eager to know why Ley was sent to protect Pol. Is Pol living separately from his twin? Kind of sad.