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for Innocent Flower

by ravielyaxis

person lovelyl
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I think that Takeru knows or at least suspects. As for Nick I reckon he feels a attraction toward Alec/Nannia and is unsure why and I'm gathering she feels the same toward Nick.

This story is really getting to the good bits. Update very soon.
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person Bah
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! Can't wait to see what will happen. ;)
person lovelyl
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought Takeru would be perfect for Nanna but the more I read the more I prefer Nick, he seems to suite her more. Nick stands up for "Alec" and confines in her. Nick for sure.

Please more. :)
person lynngreg
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please Update SOON!!! Really awesome story so far, I want to know what happens next!!
person kylee123
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter. Lucas seems to be turning into a stalker. Millie made me giggle but in real life I would have killed her for getting into my business with Lucas like that. I was hoping that Nick would make a pass at Alec! I just realized that Alex said that she is already in love with someone! I hope it is Nick!
person kylee123
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great. This is the only boy/girl story that I am reading at the moment. I have so much fun with each chapter. It is fun watching Alex get tortured. I am just as bad as her mother and sister. I suspect that Nick is feeling attracted to Alec. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person lovelyl
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I get this distinctive feeling Alec ends up with Nick?
person lovelyl
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, now mum is on it too. I can't wait to see when one of the guys suspect. Nathan seems like a good guy.
person kylee123
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I laughed so hard at Nana's evil mother and sister. They would not care if Nana stayed a boy forever. I feel strongly that Nick does like Alec. It will be interesting to see if Takeru is attracted to Alec too. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you

its interesting

I particularly like the end of chapter 6

that my friend was genius

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