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for Innocent Flower

by ravielyaxis

person lovelyl
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice :)
person kylee123
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh! Alec needs to run away from these crazy girls. They are enjoying themselves too much. I guess the whole charade will be over if Alec really does show up as a girl. Nick is going to have a heart attack if Alec pulls a trick like that. I hope he has had enough time to think about his own feelings.
person kylee123
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh darn. I guess the whole kiss was a dream. Or was it really? It would be quite funny if Nick kissed Alec and then bonked her on the head. The three roommates a such a cute trio. The guys are probably wondering how Alec can turn so red for no reason. Great chapter. I think your chapter lengths are fine. Especially since you update so often. It takes time to write!
person kylee123
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see the manga version when you have it posted.
person lovelyl
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling after I posted the last review you would make it a dream. Good idea to have Nanna meet Nick as herself that would work really well. Until Nick wants her to meet Alec.
person lovelyl
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I knew it about Nanna aka Alec and Nick. Okay now I want to know what is next.
person kylee123
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So it is Sakura who finally got to take Alec's clothes off. I am glad that she did not tell Nick and Takeru. I am kind of freaking out because I want to know what happened! Did Nick finally kiss Alec? I loved the scene with them holding hands while watching the movie. Very cute. Very good chapter. I am eager to see what happens next.
person Sonyasha
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok that was mean to leave off right there. Also your chapters have been getting shorter and shorter, Please start making them longer again. It's no fun to read when there short. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
person lovelyl
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was Takeru he knows but hasn't told anyone. :D
person kylee123
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! It is Friday. Nana needs to tell people to stop taking her clothes off. First Cherry and now one of or both of her roommates. OMG! She must have that "Please rip my clothes off me!" look going on. Maybe the blonde hair pushed Nick over the edge. I can't believe her roomates would take her clothes off. How perverted! Someone has some explaining to do. I guess Nana has some explaining to do too - Hahaha! I am looking forward to the next chapter.