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for Innocent Flower

by ravielyaxis

person lovelyl
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what happened to this story good to see your back. :D
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“I guess you could call me… Nana’s ex?” Nathan suddenly says, putting his arm around me....(WHAT WILL NICKS RESPONSE BE?!?

"i guess you could call me... Nana's CURRENT" Nicks says as he pulls Nana towards him and kissing her passionately.
....yeah... that's whats gonna happen ((even if it ONLY happens in my head)
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I love Alec/Nana, Nick & Takeru. I can't seem to choose between the two guys. Takeru strikes me as pretty...well, pretty mysterious whyas Nick...he's such a sweetie. I can't wait for the next update. :)
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ive been wanting to review for a long time but...im lazy thats all there is to it
im enjoying innocent flower wish i could have told you earlier but as i said before im lazy hence y ive not posted any stories or anything *sighs*
i really like chrissy shes my fav character
i can just see a pic of her half looking like an angel while the other half is a devil XD
person lovelyl
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a tease..... LOL! You do have to update ASAP I am dying to find out about the dance when Nick sees Nanna in girly clothes. :D
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I'm glad you updated!! :D Great chapter!
person lovelyl
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay now you really have to update extremely soon, you can't just leave it like that not now. LOL!

person Marguerite
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello Raven,you know what this fic really got me laughing so hard. I'm really hooked right away. Glad that I've come acrossed with this amazingly great fic. For some reason I find Nick to better match Nana,with his protective gestures and such, I just want Nick to win Nana's heart,lol. Keep writing. Thanks a lot. Keep safe. God bless!
person Marguerite
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh,my! I'm so freaking happy about this whole chapter. Yay, Alec loves Nick,lol.. Though I'm a bit sad coz she really can't tell him that she's actually a girl,oh what a predicament*sigh*. Hmn,wonder what really happened?heehee. Gotta read on.Thanks a lot. Great job,btw. Take care. Do continue :p
person Marguerite
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew,this was getting better an better with every chapter. I'm super excited now,lol. Hope that all things will turned out well about the upcoming dance ball and how would Nick react once he'd learned the truth. Love this to bits. Update whenever you can,pretty please. Thanks again. Good luck.