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for Hunger

by GreatMasterM

schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow. this was really good. and really laugh out loud funny at times. im glad i read all 3 stories, but of the 3 i like hunger the best. well done.
person Kuromei
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup. Dirty, dirty boys they are. X3 It was nice, seeing Lucas with the upper hand this time. And he held in that hand whipped cream and chocolate syrup. X3 Not only that, but TJ's "rival" made a reappearance. lol XD

Another dirty, dirty fic, man, and I mean that in a good way. ^w^ And thanks for the mention in the PAN. X3
person Lisa
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Sage, you are so funny! "....and quite possibly death", hysterical!!!! Since this is your third story w/these guys, I had to go to your profile page and read the others. The first one, tho, jeez, quite, idk, ewwwwww. lol Don't think I get into the sweat and piss much! But good story all the same.

This story was better; a belated Hanukkah present for me; I'll take any presents I can get! Hahaha

Anyway, glad to see you're still writing! Never let your talent go to waste. Have a great New Year's Sage!
person BlackOpalReborn
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would kind of like to see a second chapter to see how TJ gets/takes his revenge on Lucas :)
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:) i thought the zucchini was supposed to have a name? :P great job!
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