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for The Deal

by artpersonak

person Jenn
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you decide to do a sequel a some point, I really enjoyed this.
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I lovee this story!! I wish you'd keep going just because I think relationships like these are hot. Not really the abusive stuff but the fact that he still loves her after all this time!!
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy buena, muy bien escrito y da para muchos capitulos mas, por favro actulizar muy pronto, ana maria
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
preciosa, espero mas capitulos pronto, tenemos que ver como la va a cazar y que va ghacer, ana maria
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una hermosa historia con una niña bastante histerica y un hombre que sele con lo que quiere, espero la continuacion, maria ana
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story but then again I love everything you write. Hope you think about turning this into a story, it's too good to be an oneshot in my opinion. Keep on writing & Happy Holidays :)
person Linece
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ! :-) And really hot. I wouldn't mind a sequel. :-)