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for Emergency Services Week

by Acal

person mutantx1
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another great chapter! :)
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Una historia muy linda y suoper hot, espero que continue, gracias. maria ana
person mutantx1
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Only "complaint" I have about this story, is that it's clumped together and not spaced out. If there's one thing I hate about reading stories is that its clumped up. Very nice story though, I really liked it!
person Acal
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review :D that's the irritating thing about this site, it ignores the spaces I put in when I write it. If I have time I go back and re-space it but its a real pain.

Glad you liked it though, there's more to come
person mutantx1
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One thing I will say is that I don't care too much for the anal play and all of that. I would LOVE to write a second chapter to this!