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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this story was awesome! I loved every chapter! Well-written, good pacing, and believable too! I felt like I was flying through the air and performing the acts with them! And that final scene with Jubal tucking them in, and petting both of em! Flippin adorable! This story srsly needs more reviews/attention.
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have just one negative remark for you: Why the hell isn't it longer? ^^
The story is really nice. Next time, post the individual chapters on different days, like once a week, and I guarantee you that no one will overlook it.
The story is really nice. Next time, post the individual chapters on different days, like once a week, and I guarantee you that no one will overlook it.