rate_review Reviews

It was so sad :(

haha oh god. you got me so good.
I was just sitting here reading, kinda feeling bad for the guy; but I was literally like "da-da-da-da...hmm. wait. what?!"
I think you're absolutely brilliant at writing. I mean to be able to change the entire context of the story with a single word. incredible.
I'm not usually one for 1st person POV's...but you write a mean 1st person.
I am actually kind of sad to see that this is a oneshot. I would love to see how you work the dynamic of a son loving his father (and maybe having his secret revealed. smut ensuing or not...:D). If it is anything like Daniel and Denial (which is brill' btw) I think it would be an awesome read. Think about it yeah? ;) jk.
I hope to see you update with something soon :)

I really liked the storey but i was so suprised to find out it was the dad but i like it like that. :) I'm disapointed though at the fact that it's only a oneshot and not only a full length story, but i do encourage you to keep doing more. You write so good and i can actually imagine how he looks unlike other authors who skip it. Please continue the story even though some people discourage it a bit because i bet they're the ones reading along with the other sicko's like me, pretty please continue. I love a good story and yours is definetly one.

Very well written- it was easy to relate to the main character and his emotions especially with the POV style of writing. Don't know so much about the dad bit, but was definitely unexpected. Brilliant one-shot :)

Not only was this fantastically written, but that twist at teh end was absolutely superb! Great Job!

i am finally here and i LOVE it!! :)
beautiful -if scary- twist you got there. poor boy. but every writers dream, to keep your readers off track that much ..

plus, it made me laugh ("nakednakednaked")and gave a very lovely reminder of how it was being young and hopelessly in love.

perfect!
^^ rain

Shit! You got me! I thought the whole time it was his best friend, not his dad. Ewwwwww It was great until the end.

ooooh good one. didnt expect that x