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December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think... I love it :) And I cant wait to read more.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start so far. It has a bit of The Beauty and the Beast feel toward it :) Very short chapters though :( but that's okay, hopefully that means you'll update more often! I can't really say much more since we haven't gotten much to really talk of (only introductions of both characters and setting, so on) but so far it's a great start and I'm definitely going to check out the next chapter when you post it! Keep up the good work ;) and sorry for such a short review. Update soon. Oh, and both main characters sound very intriguing (esp. the master).
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You write very well. I like how the story is unfolding. Please continue.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 2. I can't wait for them to meet. Does the snake god have any special powers?
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your cliff hangers are awesome but so....it really makes me want to read more and more and more. What does the kid look like or will we be gettting what he looks like from the naga? I can't wait to read more and thank you for a fresh new read.
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a geat second chappie!!! I can't wait for Klaviere and Tyson to meet!!! And I can't wait for Tysons reaction!!! I really like the beginning of this story!!! See you soon!!!!
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start. can't wait to see what you do with this!! i wonder if he's going to be seme or uke?? can't tell yet lol. keep up the great work.
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I wonder how old the snake god is, since everyone seems to have forgotten about his existance.
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so hooked! The poor snake...I hope that he gets some company...;) Thank you for a great start and I look foward to the next chapter.
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really a wonderful start!!! I like storys with nagas or Sakes in general but I think I asume right that he is a kind of naga just for my imagination!!! I really like the start of this!!!! I hope the poor forest god will get a lovely companion soon!!! It's so sad when they are so lonly because of what they are!!!! Hope you continue with this wonderful story!!!! Hope to see you soon with the next chappie!!!!