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by Katiesroom

schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck! I had this whole review and AFF ate it!!!!! Ok, Reader's Digest version: OMG, I'm still crying over this chapter! I'm so glad Hal decided to have the surgery; his definite acknowedgement of his feeling for Russell. But I NEED TO KNOW how the surgery will come out!!!!!!!

You can't leave it like that!!!!! I want to make sure Hal's gonna be ok!!!!!!
person kylee123
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your ending. I am so full of happiness because Hal has decided to do the surgery. I am also dying to know how the surgery turned out. If you ever feel like doing a part two or a oneshot of their ending, I would love to read it. I have to say that you did a very good job on this story. I really loved the way that Hal decided to tell Russel of his decision. I hope things will turn out well for them in the end.
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely ending!
I wish it could continue, but I respect the classy finish!
XoXo
person vicxn
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow i absolutely loved that story. When i got to the chapter when Russel found out Hal was dying i felt a bit unsure about going on because i get really emotional and hate reading stuff that makes me cry. But i was already really enjoying it so i carried on and now im glad i did. I hope that maybe you would consider a sequel so we could see how the surgery goes. xxx
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic and so well written the descriptions are my favorite part, you do of course know that I have to trip you when we pass by each other in the writers wing hahaha. I'm kidding. I can't wait to read more, you made my christmas eve which I do believe is gonna suck cheese because of the people I have to be around aaawww hahaha.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~
Next chapter please! *continues sobbing*
Nice *sniff* story.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so hard to read. Just the raw emotion that both Hal and Russell show each other is so emotional, I can't think of another word for it.

Why doesn't Hal try the treatments? It's worth a shot, right?
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loooovee it!! its sad. its dramatic. its hot! you are truly gifted. i'll be following this story intently. =]
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story and I like the new twist!
Very juicy sex scenes as well!
Can't wait for an update!
XoXo
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is horrible!!!!! Nooooo, not Hal!!!!! I'm so sad for Russell; I think he's totally falling for his obnoxious teacher! And why wouldn't Hal want to try anything he could to prolong his life?

This is so sad. Totally depressed me.

Hoping things will turn around before the New Year! (Hint, hint) lol