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July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is just the best fiction I've ever read. I was crying, seriously. Especially at the beginning of the last chapter when I thought that Hal was dead. Thank you so much for this story!! <3
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October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooo....MI.....GOD..!!!!!!! I LOVED IT SO MUCH....AT FIRST U HAD MI WEN HE WAS AT THE PARTY BUT...OMGG!!!! THIS STORY WAS FUCKIN AMAZIN!!!!!!!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
6) Welp that explains a lot why Hal is kind of a jerk. I guess he just doesn't what people to attached to him becaus they'd be hurt to see him go. But he's an idiot for not taking the chance of the surgery and I really hope that Rus talks him into getting it.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(1) Oh what the f**K that teacher sounds kind of like a jerk and he is a freakin' pervert. I don't date I screw. Though I can't say I don't know people like that. Urg, he got under my skin but the smut was very entertaining. Why would Hal be turned on at the thought of being caught? I don't get tha concept but that's just me. This looks like a very interesting start.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
2) Jerk.... Hal is an assanine jerk and Russel seems like he just wants too get laid but it seems like there is a reason Hal doesn't want a relationship. Interesting.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
3) Ah so Hal is capable of kindness after all. Surprising. And why did Russell have to le those comments get to him anyway? Well I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
4: They almost got caught LOL. It was a good chapter.
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
5) good chapter
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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant! have read it so many times but you make the character so real and i absolutely love hal! I want more xxx
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story of yours, it's gotta be one of my favorites.
I would really like there to be a sequel, or at least a one-shot for it, that depicts their lives later on.
I would really like there to be a sequel, or at least a one-shot for it, that depicts their lives later on.