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for The Visit

by pepsibeth

schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
alucinante el cuento, muy bien escrito, no se i da para mas capitulis, porque sino escribir los mismos que seria muy agradabel para leer. maria ana
person lakara
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This so reminds me of my bf. He started out as my online dom and i'm supposed to be going to visit him next month for the first time since meeting him online two years ago. I hope it goes as well for me as it did for the girl in this fic. It was so easy to imagine myself and my bf doing this. Great job and i look forward to reading the rest of your fics.