rate_review Reviews

To begin I really like the tone of your story. I like the plot and I like the premise. But I am having a very difficult time reading this. To explain why it is simply because you have extermely long sentences, and it makes it hard too focus. I think a simple solution is to throw in some sentence variety. Give us some short sentences after a long one just to ease up on the readers eyes, because we are reading off a computer screen or even a smart phone(maybe. But I do like this story and I want to continue reading but my eyes can;t handle the limited number of breaks given between sentences and with in the sentences.

Keep up the good work.

Omg. Omgomgomgomg. I found this story yesterday and I got totally hooked! And okay, the prologue was so confusing that I kinda stared at it for a while, but the plot is so interesting! It got me all excited! Until I realised you haven't updated in like 2 years. Which makes me sad. :( I hope you're still planning to continue this story, though! It would be a shame to simply trash it, and I'm dying to know what's going to happen!

I'm glad you updated this! I'm rather intrigued at this point. Keep up the good work.

WOW this is a realy good story. so original please keep this story going till the end.

I like how it is progressing

and again goodjob

^_^

Wow

Not many people have

this kind of idea

that of bringing the writer/ writer meeting face to face thier own characters

I have to admit (the concept is pretty scary)

I can't wait to see what happens