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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wish there was more!
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June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update?
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like the first two chapter but what have me wanted to read the suit it's your comment about trust and rape. I totally agree with your point of view and I'm surelly going to continue this story.
Thunder's mysterious, he's going to have a lot of work to do to gain Elias trust, but it will be interesting to see how.
Gwen
Thunder's mysterious, he's going to have a lot of work to do to gain Elias trust, but it will be interesting to see how.
Gwen
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I will love to see the rest of the tale.
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I want more it was very good!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Can't wait for more...
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far! can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oohh, I think I'm gonna like this one :) Very good start- sounds like it's going to get worse for Elias before it gets better. Looking forward to more!
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. It definitely has promise. Of course, I don't mean this against you, but I hope it's not one of those stories where he is forced to be a slave and then fights it and then *ppooooffff* magically falls in love with his master. I hope its a little more original, I mean just from the summary and name and stuff I just got the vibe. Oh kay, I sound negative. I didn't mean to. I like it a lot. I will be looking for some updates. By the way, I like your characters strength a LOT. Hope to see more!
Alann
Alann