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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holly sh*t!Really, how could he survive under this master?! O.O ant BTW, your imagination works great! it felt unbelievingly real! O.o
I think the next time he go with the first option! I just don't know which one would hurt more?! poor boy ... and there is no one to care or help! what a destiny! T.T
oh, thanks for the answers! :D I love mostly dark fictions with happy ending! but in general, I like dark ones more than lighter ones! so I think I can bear with this kind of torture and violence far more better than other people out there! Though, I wish for happy ending, but still, I too curious and even with a sad ending, I have to read and finish it! and you are a powerful author to write all these scenes so natural, so real, ... and I'm enjoying this part a lot!
Anyway, I talk too much! Please update soon! Thanks ^_^
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I was forgetting! about ideas of this kind, maybe you want to check "bdsm library". It has a thousand fictions in it with torture themes which are too disturbing to read! I read 1 or 2 and decided that they are not my thing! but still, great ideas for writing this fiction! :p
I think the next time he go with the first option! I just don't know which one would hurt more?! poor boy ... and there is no one to care or help! what a destiny! T.T
oh, thanks for the answers! :D I love mostly dark fictions with happy ending! but in general, I like dark ones more than lighter ones! so I think I can bear with this kind of torture and violence far more better than other people out there! Though, I wish for happy ending, but still, I too curious and even with a sad ending, I have to read and finish it! and you are a powerful author to write all these scenes so natural, so real, ... and I'm enjoying this part a lot!
Anyway, I talk too much! Please update soon! Thanks ^_^
ps:
I was forgetting! about ideas of this kind, maybe you want to check "bdsm library". It has a thousand fictions in it with torture themes which are too disturbing to read! I read 1 or 2 and decided that they are not my thing! but still, great ideas for writing this fiction! :p
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I just wanna tell you that how much I have enjoyed reading this! I just found it this morning and read it back to back and finished all 5 chapters and now I can't wait for more! :D
oommm, so this one doesn't have any happy ending?! I mean is he going to die or something by the end of the story? or maybe perhaps by some miracle, things turn better?! some one who rescue him or a change of heart in the master?!
Anyway, the whole plot and environment that you have created is unique in its own way! and a lot of thins has remained a mystery like what happen to his family, how exactly did he captured, why he doesn't remember anything? and what is his name? really, did you mention it or did I miss it?! :p
and this is one of the worse cliffhangers that I have ever had! :( please update soon! ^_^ and thanks for sharing ;)
I just wanna tell you that how much I have enjoyed reading this! I just found it this morning and read it back to back and finished all 5 chapters and now I can't wait for more! :D
oommm, so this one doesn't have any happy ending?! I mean is he going to die or something by the end of the story? or maybe perhaps by some miracle, things turn better?! some one who rescue him or a change of heart in the master?!
Anyway, the whole plot and environment that you have created is unique in its own way! and a lot of thins has remained a mystery like what happen to his family, how exactly did he captured, why he doesn't remember anything? and what is his name? really, did you mention it or did I miss it?! :p
and this is one of the worse cliffhangers that I have ever had! :( please update soon! ^_^ and thanks for sharing ;)
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like it. I'm a bit of a sucker for stories like this, and your writing is good. Only complaint is that the story is moving a bit too slow, and at times feel a bit repetitive. Other than that, good job! Will be back for more.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw this starts really sad!!! I still hope that after all the abuse and everything there will be some kind of happy end!!! I'm a happy ever after fanatic ^^ But still I really like the beginning of this story!!! I hope it doesn't prevent you from continuing silver eyes!!! See you soon!!!