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Hey! I noticed you didn't have too many reviews on this, so I thought I'd leave you one halfway through. I love stories like this, where it's will against will, one trying to break the other. I think it's a fairly well-written story and though there is a bit much rape, that's only to be expected. I can't wait to see what his master is going to be like, and how he is going to react when he finds out that he's not truly broken.

Also, seeing as I have never read silver eyes, this story is a little confusing to me. I am having a hard time picturing what a Darcan is. Anyways, I look forward to reading more! :)

This... this is brilliant! The hardships 'Drake' faces and his slow, awkward transition back into a free life (*crosses fingers*) are complimented by your wonderful writing style. I genuinely feel for the character you've created and I'd love to see this continue. Keep going and good job so far!

Ahhh, I thought I would get a name at last but ... lol

It actually seems like things are going to get better! but the thing you said that he is gonna be dismembered have me thought what could actually happen?! because here it seems like all the were can actually enjoy themselves along side of being used?! O.o

so my guess goes to a particular customer who is so cruel to do something like this?! or him trying to scape and the captured and the punishment being to get dismembered???!!! it doesn't seem like to be the case but how can I tell?! :D
So are you going to do it really?! hoomm for the sake of the fiction maybe a limb would be good and specially a foot because he can't run away anymore and it goes with the storyline of his life! :(

but I really likes it to see things have been change for the better!

Well, good job as always ;) please update soon ^_^

For once while reading this story I feel happy! Its wonderful that he finally is treated like someone, is able to walk and talk and even have a friend. Unfortunatly I'm just waiting for that other shoe to drop in the next chapter. Just waiting for something horrible to happen to the poor guy.

Ive been reading this story for a while and every time I read it I get so sad and depressed for him. I could try my hand and drawing him though, if you would like. I also have some ideas for the disfigurment to come. He could get his tongue cut off, loose and eye or fingers or toes, perhaps get whipped across the face so it leaves a nasty scar. Anyways, if you are interested in having me draw him you can contact me by my email at amazoncat123@yahoo.com. I can show you some examples o my work. I'm not the best artist around, but I would love to give it a shot.

My God!!!

His suffering has no end! :(

I really wish I could be there for him! help him out of this whole situation. Though I don't like the idea of him dying at the end of this story! I don't think you want to kill him just yet! so I'm sure I'm gonna this boy in next update but please have some mercy :) life is cruel but somewhere it should have some joy in it too ...

I just feel so sad every time I read this fic ... sigh

well, please update soon ^_^ thanks

Chapters 1 through 9. OOOO I can't wait to see if he'll ever get his freedom or will he break before he gets a high chance of escaping the hell he's living in. Update soon! I wanna know what happens!

OMG, poor poor thing! :( and that old bastard !!! >.<
maybe death would have been better! just jumping from the cliff!
well you did say it's not gonna be a happy ending so I presume that he might die by the end of story! at least this way he'd have die on his own term!

Ohhh... back to that s.o.b master, it's only getting worse! I can't imagine what can be done to him next?! O.o maybe his going to castrate him?! hoomm? I don't know! ...

Well, plz update soon, I really wanna see what happen at the end?!

oh, BTW, I was looking at that site I told you before for torturing ideas :O I just search it and found this fiction, I mean all of this authors fiction, that have a lot ideas! very sadistic ones, not to mention! O.O it might give you some hints for the next chapter because I know that's gonna be a challenge to write them!!! I know, I can't do that! well, this is it: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/chapter.php?storyid=8047&chapterid=25914

Take a lot but be cautious lol it's dangerous :p
;)

Ahhh, I want to read the next chapter! Please??? Every time I come to AFF I check to see if you have updated but to no avail! :(

Please update ... (puppy eyes)

Thanksss

OMG!!! Is there anything else that can happen to him??? T.T


While I was reading, I wished someone, anyone of the guests, took pity and bought him off! and offer some kind of relief! but I know you told us it's not going to happen!

Is there a way out?! maybe only death! Gush ... how long could he possibly endure this?!

Have you read "Forgotten" by Traxie? If not, do read it! You might find it quite interesting, especially after chapter 5-6. Do read it. ;)

And thanks for updating! :D not to mension a long one, which I enjoy! not of his suffering I mean ... I think you know what I mean! :p

Update soon, Thankssss.