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for Where the Moon Lies

by azalea

person Kerrisa
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Stretches languidly* That was some good reading, I think i'm ready to go to bed now =) Azalea-sama brings out the kitty in me. I want to do full body stretches and then curl up in her lap to be petted and stroked like the pampered feline that I am. I'm that happy kitty, and Azalea's fiction is my cream~! I am soooo happy my semester is over (well, has been since the 18th) and I can relax and get back to my reading (I spent the last few days gaming xD). I was super super happy to find so many updates! Poor Jesse and King!! They get a break for a few years and then its taken away in one night! Darn you Rusell!!! Can't you just be understanding!? Dx AGH!! I want to beat him with a stick for shooting at them! And on top of it all I don't even get to find out what's going to happen to them in the next update cuz they aren't the focus of that chapter!! You're stringy me along like a puppet! Like a Marionette D=!! Lol not that I mind really, lol I'm enjoying every word of this story. Azalea J Rocks My Socks xD I want to cuddle and love on her all day xD Less Than Three! I can't wait to read more, but I kind of have to =) XOXOs
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn thats a good tale ill be waiting for updates
person B.
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue I'm absolutely in love with this story!
person Leicee
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's moving kinda slow but it's very interesting so far, can't wait to read more. =)
person anon
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeee!* Jesse's turning into a wearwolf omg! Please update soon!
person kylee123
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANKS for the update! I have been thinking about your story and hoping to see a new chapter. I really love this story. I am so happy that Jesse and King did not get separated. I am glad that they finally found someone to take care of them a little. Of course Jesse will have to deal with his changing and they might have to leave town. plus your spoiler made me nervous. Whatever happens I hope and pray that nothing bad will happen to sweet little Kingsley. Anyway, congratulations on writing such a great story. It is turning out really well.
person kylee
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad for your promise at the end of the chapter. I can't take anymore heartbreak. I read this chapter with my eyes watering again. I can't believe that Finn had to die like that. His kids never knew what happened to him. Life certainly was hard for Jesse and King. Always homeless and not even a cave to call home. Reading about Jesse and King having to live outside in the snow and cold made me appreciate my own home even more. I know they have a touch of supernatural in them, but I can think of nothing worse than being outside all day and night for the entire winter. The story is amazing. Please keep up the good writing. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Dysnomie
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying it. It's great to read a story that builds up the characters this way. Can't wait for the next update
person Kerrisa
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are unshed tears in my eyes! =( I blame you so! What a sad birth!! And Finn was completely heart broken!! And I just realized she had a baby horse inside her! SHe must have been huuuuge! Poor woman! D= Damn that stupid jealous witch! Ahhh! I hope you update again soon! I want to know what these two families have in common =D ANd Jesse is so cute! A veggie luvin werewolf =D He's already proving to be different xD Yay! So excited!!
person kylee123
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have done an amazing job with this story. Congratulations. I was already ready to cry at the end of the prologue. Now at the end of chapter one, I am in mourning for Candace. I am so mad at that horrible witcch! I think you have quite a masterpiece here. I am very eager to read the next chapter. I am wondering if Kingsley will be intelligent and if she will be able to communicate with her family. thanks again for sharing this story.