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I want to know what happens, can't wait. Please continue.

This is a really good story, I can't wait for more. When I first read the summary I thought that this was a silly story, I mean, his sister was a horse? But this is really good, it's exciting, well written and I feel for these guys, they're all alone and don't know what's happening.

All in all, one of the best stories I'm currently reading. :)

I have never seen so much description put into things that are not the main characters as well as the pasts of characters as far back as before they were born. I like your story, the idea is great and I am anxious to get further but sometimes I am finding myself skipping down to get past long parts of normal everyday life stuff that isn't even the main characters. Alden and Jesse are the main focus but we just now see Alden and not even from his view point like how jesse's was. Five chapters of background and a LOT on parents and siblings and things like that which most people do not spend much time on. I would like to see more of the main pair please.

Here, I'm reviewing just to make you happy :P.
I loved it. I like how you're developing the characters.

Hurray! I am so glad to see a new chapter of this wonderful story.

I love the new chapter. Of course Jesse has been freezing his tush off in the winter cold for several months now (since January). I am eager to find out what happened to Jesse and King. Jacob and Sarah's family is huge. Six children- wow. I am guessing that Lex and Alden will be the ones to encounter Jesse and King. There is going to be quite an upheaval when a werewolf and his changeling sister meets up with this perfect American family. I can see a lot of emotional encounters ahead. Very good chapter. I am guessing that this takes place before Jesse's secret gets discovered by Russell. I am so eager to read the next chapter.

There's something special about Mari and Posa? Omigosh, like they're... werewolf's? Or something? Now I have to know! And I wonder when Jesse and King are going to show up again! Update! Update! Update! Please?

I like the premise of the story. I'm a fan of werewolves, so I'm interested to see how you handle them. And having a girl be born a horse is quite original. Good job. Let me know when you update.
I noticed a lot of minor spelling errors, but you warned me about those. I didn't see many grammar issues.

Hi. I miss your story. Jesse has been outside and naked for a month now - poor boy. I hope you still going on this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay. A new chapter. How could you send poor Jesse off into the winter wounded and without any clothes even? You are truly evil. Plus you are extra evil for making us wait to find out what will happen. Is Russell truly willing to kill the boy that he has been living with for all these years and King too. We have piles of snow outside right now and it is about fifteen degrees so I can really feel Jesse and King's pain. Everytime I go outside for the next week, I will be thinking of these two. Please be a merciful with King and Jesse. I don't want them to suffer anymore. The story is so gripping, I can't wait to read more.