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For being beta-less, you're doing quite well. There are no glaring errors that I see, just minor ones and not many of those. I'm glad things are going well for you IRL. :)

I'm still very much enjoying the intrigue of your plot as well as the budding relationship between the Prince and Gerulf. It's not going too fast or too slow, just the right speed, which is very difficult to achieve. I commend you on that. ^^

You know, you can create an account in the Forums hear and make a thread where you answer people's reviews. That's what I and a lot of other authors do. Also, I'm a beta and I would enjoy helping you out, even though you really don't need much help. If you would like my help, I have a forum account under this same name. You can either send me a pm through there or get my email and send me a message.

I look forward to your next installment!

Guh. That kiss melted my heart!! Such a sweet slow burn with this story. One of my favs on this site right now!

Hi DancingGrimm. Thanks for the wonderful new chapter. I will be carrying around the image of Gerulf and Mihai entangled in each other's arms on the bed for the next month. Such a romantic picture. Gerulf was so sweet to bring back a present for Mihai. It was just what the prince needed to cheer him up a little. It feels like they are determined to kill Prince Mihai. I wonder what the reason could be. I hope Gerulf will be able to figure this mystery out. I cant wait for the next update.

Just got done reading chapter 7. I have this awful feeling the Maester is the prince's dad and he wears a mask so no one will notice the resemblance. It would make sense too for him to be protective of the prince and perhaps scare off what he thought to be unworthy companions. Maybe I'm way off though! :) Needless to say I'm highly intrigued. great job!

update? :) I hope you'll continue this story, I love it to bits.

I found your story through the search function, so I decided to look up when you had last updated. Of course, being the bumbling idiot that I am I got the date wrong and thought you hadn't updated in years! Naturally I was very dismayed, as I had read most of the chapters and was really getting into the story. Then I looked again and realized I'd made a big fucking mistake.

None of that's really important though. I really love this story and am looking forward to future chapters!

Why have I never read this before?! Love this story. Gerulf and Mihai are just too cute together.

Thanks for the wonderful new chapter Dancing Grimm. I am so sorry for Prince Mihai. He really needs a full time bodyguard. Plus Arnas needs to do a better job of monitoring what goes on in the Prince's chambers. It makes me sad to think that no one would have noticed that he was outside freezing to death in the snow. I hope Gerulf will be able to come up with a plan to protect the prince and to also find out who is trying so hard to kill him. Prince Mihai was already so lonely and now he can't even trust the food in his own home. I hope Gerulf will manage to cheer him up.

Lovely to see you back! Can't wait until the Prince and Gerulf have thank-you-for-saving-my-life-sex... and for Gerulf to find some would-be murderers :)

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UPDATE oh my god. Thank you so much! Brilliant as usual, I'm liking all the plot, lmao. Not that I don't love the smut but you need more than that to keep a story afloat, of course! Hope Mihai wakes up for the next chapter, I kinda miss him and his ice queeniness.