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for The Blue Prince

by DancingGrimm

schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn poor Mihai :( he is NOT going to like this.

That said, I should re-read this, I feel a bit lost.
person ILoveWyatt
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person kylee
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter Dancing Grimm. We finally get to meet the Queen and now Gerulf has the weight of the entire palace on his shoulders. That poor queen is under her son's thumb. How horrible. An honorable son would be protecting his mother instead of bullying her around. I am sure that Mihai will be quite worried when he hears that Jarek will be crowned. I can't wait for more clues. Keep up the good work.
person Nine
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woohooooo dancing around with joy!! you make me so happy when you update this! thank you for all your work and efforts!! I loved that chapter because so much happened! i understand about not talking about theories so i will not... as much as i want to and as much as i do like to read other people's ideas lol
i loved meeting the queen... and oh! how much do i hate that awful heir!!!!!!!! Jarek needs an awful awful end!!!
person ILoveWyatt
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person viola
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so good! Perfect ratio of erotica/romance/character/plot! Thank you!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woot! love the update! even though it took a while for you to get the chapter up, you've made that up with an awesome cliff hanger! thank so much and keep up the hard work!
person eroburn
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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at first i thought the prince might be the maestor
then i thought maybe the king
i think maybe that the maestor is in the position
to cause a revolt and possibly take over the throne.
Maybe the king wants to make our prince the new king,
and its the brothers plotting our prince's death.
and how is that chick who is dating rin related to the prince?
maybe they could marry and keep up their seperate affairs.
for the good of the country and all.
person Delia
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful- I often reread it just for the sheer pleasure of it. In fact, it's head and shoulders above much of the erotic slash fiction people are putting on Kindle- have you ever considered self-publishing in that format? I'm not sure what's involved or whether it would be at all appealing to you, but I'd certainly pay to read something of this quality. :)

Gerulf is an excellent hero, and the development of his relationship with Mihai is so organic, so fun and deep, it almost gives the reader the feeling of falling in love. You're obviously extremely gifted and I feel so very privileged that you have chosen to share your work.

Please keep it up- I'll be awaiting future chapters eagerly.
person kylee123
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi DancingGrimm. This chapter was all kinds of awesome. Lovely smex between Gerulf and Mihai and I really loved the dream Gerulf had of his mother. I wonder what ever became of the tavern that Gerulf's grandfather used to run. I also love the new intimacy between Gerulf and Mihai. They have established a little more trust in their relationship. It was a good move on Gerulf's part so share his painful paternal history with Mihai. I am guessing that the dream is telling Gerulf that Mihai's mother is a part of the puzzle that has not been seen as yet. I can't wait to see what happens next.