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for The Blue Prince

by DancingGrimm

schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Hot and Hilarious. This couple is great together.
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a fabulous chapter!
Thank you for such great writing!
XoXo
person JJ
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon...I really liked the two chapters you have posted...and I like Gerulf...he is mysterious...keep up the good work.
person kylee123
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter two was the best. I think Gerulf blew the prince's mind. I had a good laugh at the expense of our poor bossy virgin prince and his sore bum! So funny! You get an A for originality. The prince's rules were so contrived that I knew they could not possibly last for very long. I am glad that Gerulf seemed to be aroused by the prince and his strange regulations. I can see the two of them becoming very attached to each other. The story is awesome. I can't wait to read more.
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I read this chapter, I still get the same *rush* I did the first time. Wow!
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im dieing to know what the prince want performed!
person Mmkitson
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, loving the two main characters so far. Just to point out something though, you should enable anonymous reviews, because not all readers have an adultfanfiction accounts, so that'll be more reviews for you. I made this account to review the story, not everyone is going to do that.
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what a chapter ending. Please tell me you plan to continue, I so want to see him "perform".

I will put this on my Rec List on my profile. BTW, did you still need that Beta? I sent you an email in the forum.
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a tease!
A great story in the making, do continue promptly I am enjoying it!
XoXo
person Loves to laugh
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start to what sounds like a good story, I look forward to reading more. Let's see if the scarred ex-soldier can soften the cold "Blue Prince", he obivously can satisfy him physically by your description. ;)