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for The Blue Prince

by DancingGrimm

person SunaoTsuji
schedule December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24. Yes! Update! Thank you very much for it! I'm eagerly looking forward to the rest of the story! Keep it up!
person AlastrinaMeadow
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I only just got around to finishing what you've posted, and I am dying from suspense. Ha ha, you left quite the cliffhanger. I hope you can get around to finishing this, but I understand you may be busy.
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you're still working on this, it's an amazing story with wonderful characters!
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw~ To think there's only going to be 4 or 5 more chapters left! It's sad that the story is coming to a close. And I now that when it does, it's going to be at least satisfying even if it's sad. Awesome on the updates and keeping up with the writing. I'm eagerly awaiting the rest of the story!
person Sophie
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, another chapter! How wonderful! Of course, now you've left me breathless in anticipation...
person Jollyolly
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy as always to see this updated...I think I check every few days 'cause I'm that eager to read the next chapter! The suspense is terrible and I'm on pins and needles in the hopes the prince will be safely spirited away...!

Ignore the negativity and know there are readers who love this story and are very glad you're following through! :)
person afan
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this...still following this....will be waiting for the next update.
person OshieteOY
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to the rest of the story. Great job so far :P
person ILoveWyatt
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!
person ketchupblood
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoah, this was so beautifully written. I'm so glad I somehow stumbled onto this story!

I really loved Gerulf's pragmatism. He has hints of the "heroic idiot" type in him, but he always holds back because it probably makes more sense to, whether it's confronting the Meister or letting people believe that he's an idiot and untalented. His character has so much depth, from his stint in the military to his upbringing as the bastard son of a serial killer. He's angst fodder, but he doesn't angst, he just goes on with his life and carries his experiences with him. I really love reading about him.

Mihai's actually a lot flatter to me, though. Gerulf goes on about how he would be the perfect ruler and how everyone would love him, but we don't ever get to see him interact with people. For all we know, he could be as incredibly awkward with everyone else as he was with Gerulf! (I just chalk it up to Gerulf's infatuation with him knowing no bounds. ;D)

I love love love your peripheral characters. All of them. Even Armas. None of them are one-dimensional and it really fleshes out your world beautifully.

All in all, I can't wait to read more!