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for The Blue Prince

by DancingGrimm

person mashael
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really would love to read more~
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the plot gets thicker and thicker....... yes yes yes. :D more more more. XD

oooooooooohhh.. i'm almost frothing at the mouth here, Lol.


~Joanna k
person silverwind
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I read in a long time and I hope you write more on it soon.
person tmelange
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's so interesting and the meticulous development is completely enthralling. Of course, every scene with the prince and G is so seductive. I find the sex scenes to be hot as hell because the prince seems so innocent yet wanton. lol Write more soon, please.
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued and thoroughly enjoy the complexity of your characters.
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! This was pretty interesting, especially since Maester Rein didn't go all out with Gerulf as expected. I particularly enjoyed Gerulf and Armas' conversation, it's always interesting to read the both of them going at it. XD Mihai's living conditions get sadder and sadder, poor him. XD;
person Kip
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an enchanting tale! Found it quite by accident and was captivated. If I have anything even remotely negative to say about it, it could only be that I hadn't realised (mea culpa) that it was in fact still a work in progress, and like the rest of your fans I must therefore wait to find out what happens next.

I'm left wondering if Rein might be the father of our Blue Prince, as you seem to have established that the King is not? Gerulf is such an endearing character, and so well-fleshed out. With so little insight into Mihai, I'm warming to him rather more slowly, but Armas is already amusing. Yes, I can quite see Gerulf making a place for himself in all their lives. The sex scenes are elegantly described and not over-done. Someone else mentions in a review that you sustain a nice balance in regard to the level of detail, and I can only agree with their insight. While I have no problems with PWP, finding it all very well on occasion, overused it tends to become cloying after a while; however I don't see myself as likely to become bored with your writing in any hurry, there is more than enough actual story here to sustain the reader's interest.

While appreciating that something of this quality cannot and should not be rushed, I nevertheless confess myself as waiting in breathless anticipation of your next posting... Thank you for the journey thus far... 'Purr
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! I'm so glad you updated. The smut is of-course perfection but the mystery behind the Prince and Rein's damn mask really have me hooked! Please "sir", may I have another chapter?...soonest.
person kylee123
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happiness! Dancing Grimm, your writing makes me happy. The Blue Prince and Little Red are two of the best stories I have ever read here on AFF. You have a real talent for writing and you should publish your stories one day. I hope that I will see your work in the bookstores someday. I am glad that Gerulf made it through inspection day. I can see that Prince Mihai has been getting the short end of the stick in more ways than one. The whole question about his parentage and why he is set apart from the rest of the family is very intriguing. I can't wait to find out more.
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Despite thirsting for your amazing smut scenes, THANK YOU
FOR THE UPDATE!
XoXo