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This has definitely pulled me in so far. Maybe it's because I have an penchant for scarred, rough, muscular ex-military men... Either way, the plotline is original, considering that it's mostly said Lord He-man who finds an attractive male and forces him to be his sex slave, not the other way around. So refreshing, and am I glad that it has nine chapters already, because I can't wait to read the next one! :)

By the way, wouldn't a scarred mercenary be more intimidating than a smooth-faced, pretty one?

I laughed. So. Hard.

I can't wait to see how their relationship develops!

I hope you are going to continue this story... It is wonderful! I just finished re-reading the chapters *sigh* Please update soon,

Wooo~ I love this! More please! I love how this is going! *feeds ego* :D And yes, I read your profile~ XD

lovly new chapter, love the main charcter
more please ?

Hi Dancing Grimm. I was so happy to see a new chapter of the Blue Prince, I had to do a little dance. I already love Prince Mihai. I think you do a good job of portraying him as being a lonely and vulnerable character. I think that Gerulf hit a sore spot when he pointed out that Mihai spend most of his evenings alone. It is sad to see Mihai so alone and also so guarded about letting Gerulf into his life. I hope he will start to trust Gerulf as he gets to know him better.The story is so charming and the sex scenes are so hot. I always enjoy when Gerulf gives the prince his love lesson for the day. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read another chapter of this great story.

I love the mystery in this story, and I can't wait to learn more about the prince. You did a very good job of giving the reader just enough.

Keep writing,
Sayden.

I absolutely love this story!

So happy you are back... you are a fabulous writer and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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I love your writing style! The amount of detail and work to the plot, world, and characters' backgrounds make it seem almost real and incredibly fun to read. I love the fact that this isn't just another "man 'works' for prince, man falls for prince, prince falls for man, live happily ever after" and that the plot has mystery and depth to it. The only things that I find wrong, and only because I'm a grammar nazi, are ,possibly, a few misspelled words and/or misplaced/missing commas. Besides those, I find nothing wrong with your story! :)

P.S. I'm one of the people that liked the Prince from the start. I could tell he was going to be a great character as soon as we found out how naive about sex he was! ^^