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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please add chapters somebody!
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Has potential, but you need to break up the paragraphs so it will easier to read and understand overall.
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story but want longer chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chapters still need to be longer... was like 2 paragraphs