rate_review Reviews

This is the best story I have read on this site!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

I love where you are going with this story and enjoy your writing style. The wolf human concept is great. I don't know if you do email update alerts as some authors do but i would greatly appreciate being put on that list if you do! Keep writing!

I love this story. The attraction between Dallon & Kara is so sweet and I love how Dallon let's her assert herself in their pack. Roland needs to back off. He should be ashamed of himself and his petty jealousy. He was happy she was helping and then all of a sudden her attraction to Dallon, her acceptance & willingness to be a part of Dallon's pack and her freedom from him makes him juvenile. Please please update!!!

Wow, wow, wow! I just discovered this story and was glued to it!!! It is absolutely amazing!! Completely original, the characters are intriguing, and the whole story is beyond anything I have seen!! I was so into it and then I realized that you never updated again!! I almost wanted to cry!!

Did you really abandoned this story?? Did you write anything more somewhere else? Will you ever update?? Please tell me that you have written more than the 2 stories here!! I would read anything from you, even your shopping list!

Please, please, please!! Pretty, pretty, please! Say that you will write some more!! This story cannot end like this!!

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!

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MidCat

This is the second time I've read this story and its still as good as the first, I really do hope you decide to continue it someday

This story was amazing it is really good. Are you going to continue it or is it just done. It was really good I love the plot. Please update

MORE!!!!!!! please!!! You are very talented, and i love the story line. I know you havent written in a while but please try some more, if you would like some suggestions just email me.

This story is amazing! I love the characters and the way you're drawing out the suspense. Your typos are minimal compared to some, so stop sweatin' it! I'm super-psyched to read the next chapter (is there a way to get automatically notified of updates?) I'm relatively new to AFF - mostly on a Twilight kick - but Dallon & the pack are like Jacob and Edward rolled into one steamy creature - wow! Love, love, love it - keep it coming - and DON'T cheat me out of steamy details when the time comes for those "carnal urges"!

OMG just started reading this and its awesome...love the idea and the story so far....need more....pls

una gistoria muy buena e interesante, espero saber que pasa entre dollan y kara, esto es muy interesante, espero proximos capitulos muy pronto, ana maria