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August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
why does he have to be wearing a skirt to school!? i keep just ignoring those parts but i just dont understand the thinking behind it. seems he'd be allot more attractive in every way without the creepy skirt thing goin on...eck
good story so far though.
good story so far though.
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I very much like the story. The whole two peas in a pod thing is working out great. They bonded! YAY! Anyways, I wonder how Quax's dad will react to being snuffed like that(what I mean by "snuffed" is that his son never came home like he was a useless father...even though he is) And you haven't marked this as completed or abandoned, so I look forward to more!
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be perfectly honest, this is terrible. Naturally pink hair? Completely ridiculous names? You've given your story superficial fantasy elements without going all the way. Whenever writers do this, the story always seems like it's just chock full of Mary Sues (Or Gary Stus in your case) and nobody has a real personality.
That being said, the story does have potential. The actual plot itself isn't bad, and the writing style (while inexperienced) is definitely better than a lot of stuff that gets uploaded here. I suggest that with your next story you qwell the imagination and pick out some normal names and have actual characters with their own personalities and real descriptions.
That being said, the story does have potential. The actual plot itself isn't bad, and the writing style (while inexperienced) is definitely better than a lot of stuff that gets uploaded here. I suggest that with your next story you qwell the imagination and pick out some normal names and have actual characters with their own personalities and real descriptions.
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Maybe it's just me, but did you repost this chapter? I remember reading this quite awhile ago.
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was too sad. They're both dealing with their own pain, but they can't seem to help each other thru it.
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! I havent read the chapter yet but I love this story. I love both the versions so I am glad that you are still working on it.
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww, Quaaaax!!! *huggles him* We're very sorry for being so mean to you this time around. Perhaps I'll start working on that special picture I've been thinking about... and you'll forgive me... How about it, Quax? ^.^
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ, how many pills did Quax take???? I hope someone finds him before it's too late!
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwws... Now I'm ready for the next chapter lol.
I'm so happy to see that you posted this one already. Poor Quax *gives him a hug* Maybe soon I can update my version :)
I'm so happy to see that you posted this one already. Poor Quax *gives him a hug* Maybe soon I can update my version :)
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. but wow, reading 2 chapters in a row! Yay!
Poor Quax. This is a very sad part of the story. I love it though. I think I might draw them again later, after I'm done with Leias' wings. Keep it up! :D
Poor Quax. This is a very sad part of the story. I love it though. I think I might draw them again later, after I'm done with Leias' wings. Keep it up! :D