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for Moth's Wings

by Camui

person Anon
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love all three installments. I can't get enough of these two! Please write more of them, I'm begging you! Oh, and this last chapter was hilarious!
person kylee123
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the final chapter. Very well done. Very true to Dorian's personality as well. You do such a good job of portraying Dorian. I have a very clear image of him in my head. It is very sweet to think that Dorian has been devoted to and saving himself for Mikhail for all these years. I wonder if Mikhail can even understand how much Dorian really loves him? Anyway I love the story and the characters. I hope you will write more because I would love to read it!
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this series so much! please please pleeeeease continue it! i love dorian's personality and the way he thinks about everything. and mikhail is amazing too.
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love the story! Dorian is so amusing! Slamming the door to the fridge so Alice wouldn't see or smell? the booze! Oh, but he's NOT an alcoholic! Hahahahah
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your style of writing :3 It's totally addicting <3
Hope the next chapter will be just as great!
person kylee123
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! He was going to stomp on her wig!
person kylee123
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was very sweet and very funny. This visit with the Social Service lady must have been the one and only time that Dorian put so much effort into chatting up a girl. Dorian's little speech was truly touching and his interaction with Mikhail was so sweet. Who would ever imagine that one day Mikhail would be doing naughty things to Dorian in the shower? Thanks for writing this prequel. I am really enjoying it. It must be hard to go into an orphanage and to come out with only one child.
person GellyBelly
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice man! Finally! I found an interesting story! I hope you update tomorrow!
person kylee
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. So Dorian was in love with Mikael for all those years. I am very eager to read some more.
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haa! I love it!!! Dorian doesn't even know his boss's name! Too funny! So, he's the little genious, huh? It's actually surprising that he was able to adopt at such a young age. Great pequel, tho; looking forward to the next chapter!