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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's cute and sometimes I like to find a story without so much violence... Please, a better form would be nice to the eyes !
At the end, I would have prefered to read more details about his release, about Zhao's work to get it until his high ; maybe you could change this part, the story is so fast ending, almost abruptly, even if you put nicely their feelings here.
Thank you for your story.
A french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth
At the end, I would have prefered to read more details about his release, about Zhao's work to get it until his high ; maybe you could change this part, the story is so fast ending, almost abruptly, even if you put nicely their feelings here.
Thank you for your story.
A french mother and reader
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth