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for The Dream Serpent

by byasedopinions

person kylee123
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a very well written and interesting story. I am eager to find out what injuries Aidan sustained from his attack. I am eager for all the brothers to meet. Thanks for sharing it with us.
person Em
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two fucking reviews? What a shame.

This story is beautifully written, I loved the character interactions between the two pairs of brothers. It's refreshing to finally read an original story with such in-depth personas. I hope you continue writing this.


Oh, Australia. If the croc's don't get you, the poisonous spiders, jellyfish, octopi, snails, etc. will.

Love and kisses,
Em.
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, great start!! I'm hooked already...but totally curious as to what happened to the twins and why all of a sudden two more boys were brought onto the scene XD I'm sure you will explain all but please don't wait too long cuz I wanna know what happened to Aiden poor kid....and here I was thinking maybe a merman or serpent man had draggged him off to be his mate *sigh* no such luck poor boy gets bit by a croc XD
Keep up the awesome work.
person vicxn
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Im totally intrigued by this story. Just one chapter and you have gotten be completely wrapped up in it. I cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon, plz xxx