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for Luna Leviosa

by cloudybitbat6

person Shoezies
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh....They are in SO much TROUBLE! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon, pretty please?
person Nuki
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I want to know what the revenge part looks like!
person lilone77
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow the story line is so amazing and i apsolutly love the fact that she started out so timid but now craves sex almost as bad as the guys do!!!! more soon please!!!!!
person PiAnkh
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I really, really like this story! All the characters are so cool and I can distantly relate, sort of, myself to Shizuka. I hope you'll carry on writing this, cause this was totally what I needed to cheer me up after some shit happening in my life ^_^
person Nuki
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That end almost made me cry. :(
I'm looking forward to see how Marxs gets his revenge. ^^
Good chapter as always.
person Shoezies
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I've been following this story (I'm in love...Sorry I never reviewed before) and I can not believe the ending of this chapter! Talk about mean! I feel so bad for her...Can't wait for another chapter! (But I will)
person Nuki
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to write another chapter!
But know I want to know how they reward her. ^^ Greedy of me, I know. :3
Ols update soon. I'm waiting.
person Nuki
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Could you please write another chapter? I want to know how it's going on between them. Especially at school. Your story is great. I love it!
person Rammina
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's surprisingly good. Surprising because I don't think I've ever read a story with incubi in it. So it truly is original. But what happens next?
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My my!
This was beautiful!
I love the characters and the plot twist is amazing!
I sincerely hope you are thinking of maybe even putting up a sequel!
I fell in love with everyone in the story almost immediatly.
You are a great talent.
Congrats on writing this great piece of literature!

Your Newest Fangirl,

~ Andy