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for Luna Leviosa

by cloudybitbat6

schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I forgot Marx was British till I saw the word mum lol I enjoyed the new chapter.
person Jen
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. This story is great, so different and awesome! Can't wait to read more!
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well writen and good discription. Enjoyed the story.
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Keep it up please!!! I wanna keep reading!!! E-mail me back when you post the next chapter!! I wanna continue reading!!
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly written! Thank you for opening my eyes up to something so new to me! Hope you will continue this story. :)
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I love that you brought over the fairies from your other story really cool =D
person Nuki
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy you updated. :)
The chapter is wonderful as usual.
person jensofia
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated your fanfic with some Brick/Noriko action! Please keep writing I am really enjoying your work!
person Nivika
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. If you don't update here can you at least send it to me? I want to know what happens next. ^^
person jensofia
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn that's a hot fanfic!

I came to the erotica themed fanfics right after going through the scifi and fantasy section not thinking I would get to read a fanfic with any mythological creatures let anlone one with sexey incubi! Also it's not very often you get to read about a gangbang where the guys are nice which is refreshing. I know that in the actual mythology repeated intercourse with a an incubus/succubus is really bad for your health but these guys saliva have healing properties? Do their semen also have that? (It's the only explanation why a virgin would even want to go several rounds with so many at once.) If so I'd really like to have one to go several rounds with!

Your characters are interesting but I'd like to see another hardcore chapter possibly with Brick getting some with Noriko on the side.