rate_review Reviews

First of all, based on this one chapter, I rather like your writing style. Alas, what ticks me is that mr. Alexander Yates seems to be quite the cliché: mysterious, rich, famous artist who just so happens to be a great piano player, too. Also, that Gabe & Alexander would first meet at a bar, where Gabe is completely entranced by some mysterious piano playing man (who so happens to be Alexander) is... well, a cliché.

Also, there are some minor mistakes with grammar: far from being irritating, but a good beta could solve those - polish the diamond, so to speak.

Apart from those, I definitely will read further chapters and see how the story goes. Keep on writing! :)

Wow. Wonderfully done. You've got me hooked so please write more!