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October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I hate it when I start reading a story and then notice it hasn't been updated for a while! It's looked like it had good potential that was a very good first chapter, although it is probably not ganna happen, I wish you would update this. I really liked the plot and the characters, and now I'm stuck wondering what would happen next!
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will this story be continued? It has almost been a year. I find that I'm looking forward for the next chapter...
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter 1 of your story. How will Gabe to finding out that the super hot mystery man is Alexander Yates? It sounds like it should be a fun read. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Gabe was mean to that poor girl at the nightclub. Quite funny.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far. I'm sucked right in and can't wait to see where you take this.
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more please
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. Looking forward to reading more.
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good start so far. I normally don't read a story unless its a few chapters in, but I saw that you were getting a handful of reviews already so I figured it must have been good. And it was :) I enjoyed the chapter and will definitely be awaiting a second chapter. Especially since I want to find out more about this Alexander Yates guy... hm. He sounds hot! Can't wait.
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I fucking LOVE this story!!!!!! OMG, it's riveting; from the beginning to then end of the chapter!!! OMG, you better hurry up and update!!!! I'm waiting w/bated breath for the next update!!!!
As far as your A/N at the beginning of the chapter, your spelling and grammar are fine. You just need to stick in some commas here and there! Otherwise I think it's perfect!
Now, stop reading this and start updating!!!
As far as your A/N at the beginning of the chapter, your spelling and grammar are fine. You just need to stick in some commas here and there! Otherwise I think it's perfect!
Now, stop reading this and start updating!!!
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start and I love the characters you've created. I'm interested to see where this leads. Please continue!